An interesting idea, but joined by too many others. THere are a couple of common threads but too much is sidelined by the cases being worked on by the main character (a police officer).
Then the punctuation goes awry, along with a few spellings. Next we get similar names (Ray and Det. Raymond). At one time there even seems to be a confusion in the author's mind between Lori and Terri.
All that aside it is a good read and so I give it 3/5... but only just